Working with Paper

Brian Campbell posted a Ko Un poem that reminded me of this one:

WORKING WITH PAPER

Every poem can be made
into a swallow.

But you have to fold it right.

Every poem, you know,
even the failures.

Now imagine a sky for them.

Jürgen Theobaldy, tr. Andrew Shields
Smartish Pace 11

Murray on Peacocks

Here's today's poem from Poetry Daily, by one of my other poetry favorites (along with Ko Un, for example) for the Nobel Prize, Les Murray:

The Hanging Gardens

High on the Gloucester road
just before it wriggles its hips
level with eagles down the gorge
into the coastal hills

there were five beige pea-chickens
sloping under the farm fence
in a nervous unison of head-tufts
up to the garden where they lived

then along the gutter and bank
adult birds, grazing in full serpent.
Their colours are too saturate and cool
to see at first with dryland eyes

trained to drab and ginger. No one here
believes in green deeply enough. In greens
so blue, so malachite. Animal cobalt too
and arrow bustles, those are unparalleled.

The wail lingers, and their cane
surrection of iridium plaques. Great spirits,
Hindoostan in the palette of New Zealand!
They don't succeed at feral.

Things rush them from dry grass.
Haggard teeth climb to them. World birds,
human birds, flown by their own volition
they led us to palaces.

Les Murray
The Biplane Houses
Farrar, Straus and Giroux

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Daily Poem final update: 35 votes have now been cast, and one poem is sustaining its lead, but it is not so far ahead that your vote might not make a difference. The most recent vote was cast for the last remaining poem that had not received any votes, so now all 12 poems have at least one vote (and only three have received only one).

Ko Un bibliography

Coda to my post about Ko Un and his book "Ten Thousand Lives":

There's a bibliography of Ko Un's work in translation available at his website. It's nice to see that he is making it into a number of languages, especially German, as that means my German-speaking friends can read him in their own native language. I hope the translations read as well as those in the English "Ten Thousand Lives" do.

Ko Un, "Ten Thousand Lives"

Ko Un, Ten Thousand Lives, trans. Brother Anthony of Taizé, Young-moo Kim, and Gary Gach, Green Integer 2005

every tale was a tale beginning long long ago
...
When she died, it seemed she was eager to go on telling tales,
because she died with her mouth wide open,
and no matter how hard they tried to close it, it kept falling open again.

("Sam-man's Grandmother")

Ko Un deserves a Nobel Prize in Literature. This is a truly remarkable book, compulsively written and compulsively readable. BRIEF REVIEW: Buy it now. You won't regret it.

Ko Un's project, which this book presents a selection from, is to write one poem each about every person he has ever met, plus a few more about historical and mythological figures. This would be impossibly insane if he were not able to combine such vastness with the wonderful details of the individual people and the individual poems:

"Dad, Dad! Ma's dead! She died and she won't shut her eyes!"

("Sa-haeng")

our great-aunt takes up all the room.
...
What we call sorrow is not the least bit sad, really.
It's like a stream hidden in a valley, gone like the tune of a song
once you're over the crest of the next hill.
When a woman like that enters a house of mourning,
the wine and food in the offerings find their proper flavor,
don't they?

("Our Great-Aunt at Taegi")

As in these lines, many of the poems derive some of their energy from the specifics of Korean mores—here the rites of mourning. Many of them make use of the emotional Korean interjection "Aigu":

When it rained,
he would hold out both hands to the rain
and exclaim in delight: "Aigu, Aigu! How good to see you!"

("Father")

And of course there are complete poems that touch on specifically Korean things:

NEW YEAR'S FULL MOON

Bitter cold day, the new year's first full moon,
a special day.
One housewife, busy from early morning,
knowing that beggars will be coming by,
puts out a pot of five-grain rice in anticipation
on the stone mortar
that stands beside her brush-wood gate,
with a single side-dish of plantain-shoots.
Soon, an ancient beggar comes breezing up,
makes ready to spin a yarn but finally
just pockets the rice and goes on his way.
If only we had 360 more days like today in a year!
His bag is soon bulging.
His round complte, as he's leaving the village
he runs into another beggar:
glad encounter!
You've no call to go there, I've done 'em all!
Let's us celebrate a Fool Moon too!
Snapping dried twigs, they make a fire
to thaw themselves by, then
producing hunks of rice from this house and that,
the two beggars set to,
choking, laughing with mouths full.
Soon bands of magpies hear the news
and flock flapping around.

I especially love the "bands of magpies" here.

As Ko Un lived through the Japanese occupation of Korea, many of the poems contain traces of that experience (or, of course, are explicitly about it):

THE WIFE FROM SUREGI

At Frog Embankment,
there are only frogs, all the rest of the world is dead.
The wife from Suregi is weeping there,
but the croaking of frogs drowns out her weeping.
This evening is the tenth anniversary of her husband's death.
She's managed to get some barley to cook, digs spoon and chopsticks
into the bowl in ritual offering, and weeps.
Her metal spoon and chopsticks are gone, taken by the Japs.
Digging a wooden spoon and chopsticks into the bowl, she weeps.
At Frog Embankment,
she weeps, but the croaking of frogs drowns out her weeping.
It's no use to her dead husband's ears.

Still, it does not take the "exotic" element of Korean customs or specifics of Korean history to make the lines or the poems work:

At the age of a flower he died like a flower.

("Chõng Yong-gi of the Righteous Army")

See that migrant lapwing perching on a branch!

("Old Foster Father")

IL-MAN'S FATHER

The sea off the west coast isn't quite a real sea.
It's more like some nearby neighbor
clearing his throat, like a neighbor's house,
like the yard of a neighbor's house
on a sultry day
where the smell of smoke lingers even after the fire's out.

Surely no one could ever return from such a sea.

It's been five years since Il-man's father from Paekdang-mei
went off as a seaman thanks to people he knew.
He spent five years on boats catching shrimp and whitebait
out near Kaeya Island.

Il-man's father used to spit on his hands
and handle rope so deftly,
a ribbon bound tightly round his head.
Now Il-man's grown up.
he's the spitting image of his father.
Il-man is Il-man's father.

As in the characterization of his Great-Aunt as someone who "takes up all the room," Ko Un has a way with quickly sketching in a personality. The deft handling of rope in the above poem, or this: "Someone like watered wine" ("Uncle Maeng-sik").

Robert Haas featured a slightly different version of "The Women from Sonjei-ri" in his Poet's Choice in 1998, from an earlier edition of Ko Un's poems. Haas also wrote the introduction to the edition I have, in which apparently Gary Gach has joined the other two translators and reworked some of their earlier translations.

Sometimes, Ko Un even slips into what seems like magic realism:

A DEAD DOG

On digging up the heating flue under the floor,
when it refused to draw properly,
we found a dog that had disappeared from the house.
It was dead, of course.
Cautiously, Father took it up into the hill behind the house and buried it.
The next day it rained. As the rain made the leaves
green again, they barked.

Since Ko Un grew up in a country village, the poems often arrive at arresting images of rural poverty:

If a kid dies there's no tomb, no offerings:
there'll be another one born by-and-by.

("Pyong-ok")

Or even an image of relative rural wealth:

You from a rich house
had really nice clothes
your five buttons always shining bright and
every day a boiled egg snuggled
bright in your lunch-box, where the white rice
contained very little barley

("Pong-t'ae")

At this point, I have provided some examples from the first 96 pages of this book of over 350 pages. I could go on and on. To come back to my first point: BUY IT.

Anne Duden in Mantis

Mantis 6 contains two of my translations of Anne Duden, "Otherland" and "Responsorium."

I have not had time to read the rest of the issue yet, but it looks promising, with many translations, including two I really look forward to reading:

1. Mark Terrill's translation of part of a long poem by Rolf Dieter Brinkmann, along with an essay on Brinkmann's work by Martin Kagel.

2. Four poems by Ko Un, whose Ten Thousand Lives I am currently reading, and which I will blog enthusiastically about soon.

Here's one of the Duden poems:

RESPONSORIUM

I

Christ's foreskin
from the relic jar, crystal egg, or glass bowels
in words
almost lost
balanced past the park
the one full of poultry and leftovers
by Vondel
GEVOGELTE & WILD
like dog shit
and violets
and the blue suns
of anemones
already weak-sphinctered from the first warmth
and the moon's silver rocker
on the diamond plumb
frozen.

II

Or vice versa
Christ's forerank
in the garden
— Good Lord on Good Friday —
and those goblet gutturals and redthroats
and stabs
up to under the ribbed vault
heart and brain
where the one long rests, recovered
cradling and being cradled
in the mother hollow
in the double womb of bin and boat
ON SWAYING SKIFF
high above the lit-up tiles
bridges, carpets
laid silently by the shine
slanting through the windows
onto stone slabs of the lower and other dead
over and over.

III

All around
pushed, piled and massed
at small intervals
rut detectors, runners and outrunners
curly lambs
cull sheep
and the moisture mosaic
pools, puddles and channels
of vomit
master and mastiff urine
and under the bushes
for free
the ground completely slippery
with blind insemination
beside the head yoke
the joggers' sudarium.

IV

Resurrection unseals no lips.
But beauty lies here
in the bed of clouds.
On the Ij, on the Ijssel
on the ice ocean
in the horizon bird's eye
not to be caught
in the wind clock's iris
storm hub at the station
in the feather beat's breeze
in the heron's flight
from water to water
sky to sky
and fish to fish.