tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20782819.post6666019558133963885..comments2023-11-12T13:22:30.358+01:00Comments on andrewjshields: Snakeskin, March 2008Andrew Shieldshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02804655739574694901noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20782819.post-15868009919445873582008-03-16T21:54:00.000+01:002008-03-16T21:54:00.000+01:00Don, "Melinda Compton" starts out with a seven-foo...Don, "Melinda Compton" starts out with a seven-foot line and then mostly only approaches repeating it in the rest of the poem. I'm not sure what to call it, though it certainly aspires to some sort of metrical feel.Andrew Shieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804655739574694901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20782819.post-8560613683710022002008-03-13T16:27:00.000+01:002008-03-13T16:27:00.000+01:00Nice work -- it's fun seeing your old "philly" voi...Nice work -- it's fun seeing your old "philly" voice. I liked those poems with the disjointed syntax. Or at least I had you pigeon-holed as "that kind" of poet for awhile.<BR/><BR/>The one about the Spam ads has a very precise rhythm -- is it in a particular metre? Well done!Donald Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06391024449222256377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20782819.post-72863236067297420882008-03-12T20:08:00.000+01:002008-03-12T20:08:00.000+01:00Awesome advice, and congratulations on the publica...Awesome advice, and congratulations on the publication.Joannie Stangelandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06006768246992875405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20782819.post-40011229160479013912008-03-12T16:19:00.000+01:002008-03-12T16:19:00.000+01:00Glad you enjoyed them! And AB's good work, too.Glad you enjoyed them! And AB's good work, too.Andrew Shieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804655739574694901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20782819.post-58015122388829236042008-03-12T14:18:00.000+01:002008-03-12T14:18:00.000+01:00Hi Andrew /I read and enjoyed your poems, and AB's...Hi Andrew /<BR/>I read and enjoyed your poems, and AB's poems, too.<BR/>cheersSarahJanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.com